Embers

Beautiful

Hiya

Just trying to catch up on new stuff after a break and seen this.

Really really well done

Craig

Welcome Stephen, I have not written a single senyru by far and here you are writing a double one in your very first post.

Stephen, just one word: beautiful!

Especially the second half of the senyru.

These days I am writing about the memories too..

Thanks for the feedback

Hello Steph, welcome to the site. A heartfelt first post with great depth. Enjoyed it. Yes, I do think that losing the caps will add a different flare to this one.