Comments : Bride of Renaissance

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    This is just lovely! Your rhyming is spot on and it flows beautifully. Your visuals were rich and I got the entire story in there. Well done-

    • 7 years ago

      by Sherry Caayupan

      Lovely it is! Thanx if you think this is beauteous! Talk to you later.... :)

    • 7 years ago

      by Sherry Caayupan

      Wow, some of your poems have nice flow to them. Good pieces!!!

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Awww, beautifully worded...lovely work.

    • 7 years ago

      by Sherry Caayupan

      Salamat, kaibigan! I wanna get married to Mr. Right someday. Too bad I can't find him for now. Have a nice day... ;)

    • 7 years ago

      by Sherry Caayupan

      How's ur daughter? Your husband must be so lucky with you coz you are a nice woman... ;)

    • 7 years ago

      by Sherry Caayupan

      I love writing. It gives me a fulfilling kinda feeling! I might wanna read more of your poems too! Nice day... ;)

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Fantabulous flow and rhyming

    • 7 years ago

      by Sherry Caayupan

      Wow...gee thanx...I'll go over your poems and might wanna like any of them. Have a nice day... :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Mark

    Amazing poetic rhyme, as if straight out of a classic poets collection. Well done!

    • 7 years ago

      by Sherry Caayupan

      Oh wow! Gee thanx! I had fun writing this one... ;)

    • 7 years ago

      by Sherry Caayupan

      Hi, Mark! How r u? Would you mind nominating my piece, "Opposite Roads", pls? I'd like to have a chance to win...take care...(hugs) ;)