Comments : Approaching storms

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Awww. Some things when unsettled will resurface and they just keep coming back in many different ways. Some past hurts still sting if not really given closure. I hope you stay strong when the storm comes, as you are a survivor. Loved the structure and flow of this one. Hugs, Queen.

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Lady Mel, certain things from the.past are triggers for me, even when it's somebody else doing them. I'm working on finding my inner peace to deal with these new stresses. Hugs back my friend.

  • 7 years ago

    by Mark

    This is fantastic! I was taken there with you, I felt the wind and your inner fury. I wish I could nominate :(

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much Mark! I'm stoked you felt like this with this write-you will be nominating before you know it!

  • 7 years ago

    by Lucifer

    Wow! I mean after writing years, an unforgettable poem about love, directly to something strange-stress.

    Brenda, you have your unique way of writing. Talking about flow, word choice, it's always perfect in your poems.

    I mean I am not a fan of stress, but after reading this poem feeling a bit relaxed.

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      L, thank you so much! I'm not a big fan of stress either so I write, it helps. I appreciate your kind thoughts.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A sad but descriptive piece, Brenda, that was a pleasure to read if not for the dark content than for its excellent use of the centre formatting.

    All the best as ever,

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Ben, I am working through this, it was funny how things you see inspire some writes. Take care-

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Brenda this resonates so much with me - I hope writing this helped somewhat

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Em. It has, I hope you find the peace you seek and so much deserve. Hugs my friend.

  • 7 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Brenda never stop writing you sure have a way of doing so. It does help to release stress which we all have to deal with especially where the past is concerned. It Don"t take much to trigger it. You are s strong women
    Hugs

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Dagmar, thank you so much! I truly appreciate your words of wisdom and strength. I definitely agree with writing and helping you deal with the stresses life seems to toss at us. Take care-hugs my friend!

  • 7 years ago

    by Courtney Hough

    Brenda,
    This is so well written. I loved the imagery in this; could see it all playing out. The way you wrote it at first sounded like a physical storm until i kept reading. Very well done with this my friend.

    -Court

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much, part of how I was feeling and the weather was all weird, the air was full of electricity.

  • 7 years ago

    by Lvi

    Hey Brenda,

    The visuals were amazing and the structure was so effective while reading this piece,
    adding to the imagery of the storm within.

    Take care.

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Lvi, it's been interesting and the weird weather just helped it along.