by Everlasting
there's lots of water... thankfully, my area is okay. It's hard to believe that many things can be lost so easily. I just hope that there aren't too many fatalities. |
by Ben Pickard
Such a poignant and relevant little piece as this deserves recognition, Larry. That last stanza is a perfect summation of how bloody frustrating the human race is: capable of so much good, but so very morbid in its lust for others' suffering. |
by Meena Krish
Its pure devastation at its worse and it does make |
by Brenda
Larry, a thoughtful write. It amazes me, although it shouldn't how people react to a crisis. Either they jump in and help or stand there and gawk, or use it as an opportunity to exploit. You really covered it all. My prayers go to everyone affected by Harvey. |
by Ren
These past few days have been insane. This storm proved to be more emotionally, mentally, and physically exhausting than I think anyone ever expected. It is amazing how strong and amazing people can be, and it's warmed my heart significantly to see people coming together to do everything they can to help. But unfortunately there will always be those people who don't care or just make things harder...and to quote Ben (who put it perfectly into words) prove just how "bloody frustrating the human race is." This is a great and powerful write! Well done and hang in there! I hope you are safe and doing well. |
by Em
Fantastic piece and rhyming which is saddening to read. That ending though is just a snippet of the human race 1/2 nosey parkers who don't want to help and 1/2 helpers though I reckon there's more humane people than that but they aren't always noticed. |
by Em
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