by Everlasting Aug 29, 2017
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
On a tempestuous day, a girl with brownish hair |
by hiraeth
I had to do a double take to make sure that this was an acrostic poem, and upon doing so, I also realized it was a rhyming poem. I feel like there might be meter in here, but hadn't thoroughly checked. Reading every verse aloud, it flowed off the tongue. That being said, you did an amazing job with your usage of imagery, super vivid poem, and extremely creative as well! :) |
by Everlasting
Yup, there's some meter in there. Specially, in the first half of the poem. Thank you for reading. |
by Michael
Really like this E.L |
by Everlasting
Thanks Michael, I'm glad you like the acrostic. |
by mossgirl19
Hi, Lucero. Wow, I am blown away... This is indeed epic. What a wonderful feeling I had when I read this... Like I too am freed from my own suffocation. |
by Everlasting
Aww thank you, guys. I'm glad you liked the rhyming on this one too. |
by Mark
Wow...Epic and beautiful - as rhyming poems can be. Just wow. |