Wow...Epic and beautiful - as rhyming poems can be. Just wow.

Hi, Lucero. Wow, I am blown away... This is indeed epic. What a wonderful feeling I had when I read this... Like I too am freed from my own suffocation.

Great rhyming and flow... I love the creative and clever end...

Beautiful, calming write. Loved it.

Really like this E.L

An acrostic piece of art

Michael :)

I had to do a double take to make sure that this was an acrostic poem, and upon doing so, I also realized it was a rhyming poem. I feel like there might be meter in here, but hadn't thoroughly checked. Reading every verse aloud, it flowed off the tongue. That being said, you did an amazing job with your usage of imagery, super vivid poem, and extremely creative as well! :)