Poetry at its best

It is my defeat to be reminded everyday that I will not be able to write like this.

As Mark said : poetry at its best.

I can't be a star like you.

As sad as this is, Mel, there is also a tragic sort of beauty inherent.

Well written indeed,

Ben

I like the flow in this write. I hope you are okay.

Beautiful...Sadness all wrapped up in a very wonderful way Miss Mel

Much warmth

Michael :)

Lady Mel, damn it woman this is so sad! So very beautiful but sad....I a absolutely loved it. Hugs my friend, I hope you are ok...

A beautifully heartbreaking write my love. Sending so much love and more your way <3

Be still my heart - this is beautifully sad

Sad however beautiful written.

There is nothing more I can add that has not already been said

Simply wonderful

Craig x

One small and tiny suggestion I have for this piece, is the last word of your poem.
When ending a poem, it sounds so lovely and flowy when you use a two or three syllable word. Death is a sudden stop to your poem....try the word alive...just to yourself you don't have to add it...I'm just want to give you another angle to look at....

This poem is breathtaking, I do hope it Grace's the front page!

Wow what a heart wrenching piece with a touch of metaphysics! Great write Mel.

Great piece!!! Amazing imagery

Well done! I liked this one...talk about feeling like an outcast... sad poem but nice write! :)