by Lost One
This is genius. I'd nominate if I could. Give it a once over, there's a few grammatical errors, a "their" that should be "they're," but that's all just polish. Get it? Polish? Anyway, the message is beautiful, regardless of the cover. |
by Scott Cole
Any more errors, I fixed one |
by Lost One
Starring to Staring, alot to "a lot," "nobody shouldn't" should be "nobody should," or "no one should." |
by Scott Cole
Thanks man I'm not so great with my grammar at times.... |
by Lost One
No problem, I've just peen picked apart a few times for it myself lol. |
by mossgirl19
Another inspiring piece Scott. |
by Scott Cole
Thanks again.... |
I know that "never judge a book by its cover" is a very popular saying, but you've showcased beautifully what that really means here ... the true story of a person lies beneath the shiny (or not) facade that we can see. |
by Scott Cole
Thank u.... |
And beauty only wears a grin, |
by Lucifer
Do not judge by appearances; a rich heart may be under a poor coat. |
by Ren
LOVE this. Well done! |
Beautiful written. Beauty comes from within. All the best |