I loved this. It's such a wonderful thing to have those memories.

I read this and imagined a grandparent or parent sitting at your bedside as a child and telling you stories they had made up or recounts of their own experiences. Whatever, it is a wonderful little poem.
Take care,
Ben

There is a tinge of sadness as well as a certain beauty to this little poem. Flawless rhyming!

Wonderful and sad <3 :(

Excellent piece full of emotion and visuals loved it x

I completely agree with what Ben said..
It reminded me of the the childhood days.

Heartfelt!

Thank you all so much for the beautiful comments *heart eyes* xxx

I'm gutted as I'd written some huge comment on this then it disappeared. I've read this many times now and each time the rawness, the longing and the memories whether sad or happy shine through and it shows this person meant alot to you and no doubt still does which makes me wonder if it is an old flame or a family member that's passed. Fantastic rhyming as ever.

Em x

a lovely piece full of memories and emotions

well done :)

Michael

Thanks Em & Michael for the feedback.
Em-It was written with both an old flame & family member who has passed in mind lol!! ;) x