by Scott Cole
Oh yes I love it great rhyme wonderful story and awesome message.....fine job my friend thanks for bringing it to my attention. If I'm able I will nominate it.... |
by Lucifer
Thanks Scott for nominating it. |
by Em
Another Fabulous write |
by Lucifer
Mark, so you have decided you not gonna let anyone win this week. |
by Brenda
Mark, a lovely story of true love by the lemon drop kid. Your rhyming is done beautifully. Not sure why the nomination tabs aren't available yet? |
by Ben Pickard
This is a simply charming write. Well done. |
by mossgirl19
An amazing and beautiful story weaved on lemon drops. It's so unique. Even these little lemon drops, as a subject, can give life to a love that is true and enduring. It was easy to see that the girl readily accepted the treat when she was a child, but in the ending stanza she asked lemon drop kid why he always have a lemon drop handy...as if a lemon drop would help her. Clearly as we grow, we tend to lessen the value of the things that have made us happy as children. |
So very clever Mark. Really! Just too sweet (pun intended) |
by Mark
Thankyou all for your comments |
Massive congratulations on your beautiful, romantic win Mark. So well deserved x |
Congratulations on your win well deserved. Milly x |
by Michael
Well done on your win Mark :) |
by Mark
Thankyou Michael |
by Brenda
Mark, congratulations! Another stellar poem for the front page. This really was a sweet write. |
by Mark
Thankyou Brenda! |
by mossgirl19
Congratulations on your win, Mark! |
by Mark
Thankyou Mel |
Congrats on the win mark |
by Mark
Thankyou |
This is excellent! Masterfully done!! |
by Paul Hirst
A snapshot into the history books of life and loves |
by CJ Maleney
Judges comments |
by Meena Krish
Judging Comment |
This is the most beautiful poem I have ever read..! I am " smitten" by it , lol. I love romantic poems and this is so beautifully written and expressed. I was just captivated to the very end. |