Very visual, Fredy! I know that bone weariness all too well, my best to you!

-Mandy

Fredy - all we can do is keep walking on, good man. Really well written and rhymed.

Take care and all the best,
Ben

This is so wonderfully put, Fredy. Flawless rhyming and really good flow. Ah, that road... We can do nothing but walk in it! Great work!

the road was littered with corpses of ill advised decisions

^^this created strong visuals.

Amazing write !

Take care-