by Ben Pickard
I read this with a real feeling of nostalgia for a summer that isn't quite over yet, so powerful were your words and descriptions here, Mandy. A wonderful write. Nominated. |
by Mandy
Wow, thank you, Ben! |
by Lucifer
Another amazing poem! |
by Mandy
Thank you, Lucifer! |
by Michael
Oh.. Mandy, |
by Mandy
Thank you, I wanted to contribute to the ode to summer poetry going on! (I'm a bandwagoner =x) |
by Em
Beautiful |
by Mandy
Thank you, Em :D |
by mossgirl19
Mandi, you have a flare for free verse! Everyone seems to be writing about the seasons and wow, this one is absolutely another fantastic piece. It's vividly descriptive with a beautiful yet sad ambience. Nicely written. |
by Mandy
Aww thank you :D |
by Brenda
Mandy, I really like this a lot. Fall being my favorite season, I felt there was more to this than just the season though? Something more personal perhaps? I may be way off, it's just a feeling I picked up reading this- |
by Mandy
Yes, definitely something more personal. I wrote it with the idea of the feeling you get when you have to leave special times in your life behind, change. I love fall and the coming of winter, but there's also a melancholy to it. I feel that in my life alot too, while change is good, there's melancholy. Thank you for the comment, Brenda :D |
by Paul Hirst
Lovely write very poignant it reminds me of the loss of a family or loved one and being less for not being in the whole x |