Comments : Addiction - Freedom (Double Acrostic)

  • 7 years ago

    by Mandy

    Wow I love this. My brother struggles with addiction and it's been a very rough time for him, as well as family lately. It's hard to read things like this but I think this is wonderful!
    -Mandy

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mandy,
      And sorry to hear of your brother, I hope he and everyone pulls through

      Much love and warmth
      X

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    You are on a roll, Michael! This write is amazing...double acrostic! I know it is not easy to do, but hey you have penned this without any line sounding forced. Lovely message, too!

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss M
      Yes never an easy write, but the freedom part is hope for everyone who ever has to deal with the plight of addiction :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Lucifer

    After reading this never ending feeling of obsession feeling like mindfulness restless calm.

    Pure genius!

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you MrL

      Wonderful comments as ever :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    You nailed it..

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Andrea x

  • 7 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Amazing work dude

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Craig :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Crikey! I'll know I'm a 'real' poet when I can achieve something like this! This is the first time I've across an acrostic thingamy on this site and I'm so impressed!
    'Ruinous mad behaviour' perfectly defines addiction. I'm in awe Michael x
    =^.^=

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Miss Kitty Kat,
      What lovely words of inspiration x
      Thank you

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, you kicked butt and took names! What an inventive acrostic! Loved it!!!!!

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Miss Brenda, thank you so much x