by Ben Pickard
Fabulous and all done in an abab rhyme scheme which isn't easy to achieve without sounding forced. |
by Mandy
Thank you, Ben. This has been swirling in my head all morning so I finally had to sit down and get it all out. I sometimes just blurt stuff out and I don't even want to look at it when I'm done so I'm glad it doesn't sound weird :) |
by Mark
Hey Mandy! Its a great twisted allegory. ;) so many more pages to come on here too I hope! |
by Mandy
Haha thanks, Mark :D |
by mossgirl19
This one's well rhymed and flowed like a song in my head. Great job, Mandi! |
by Mandy
Thank you :D |
by Michael
Mandy, |
by Mandy
Thank you! I'm hoping that as well :D |
A wonderful piece unforced rhyming with a lovely tale. |
by Mandy
Thank you, Milly! And thank you for the nomination, wow! I appreciate the feedback :D |
This is so clever Mandy, I guess we all have blank pages still to fill with adventures. Love it! |
by Mandy
Thank you :D |
by Lucifer
If you keep on filling the blank pages of novel with such good poems, I wish it takes some time for novel to complete. |
by Mandy
Thank you! :D |
by Brenda
Mandy, love this. The story of our lives hopefully is never ending. So many chapters to tell. I hope I get to read many more of yours-well done- |
by Mandy
Thank you, Brenda! I definitely won't be able to not write :) |
wonderful piece Mandy! I am reading your poems and I don't like but LOVE most of it |
by Mandy
Thank you for the comment, Karen! <3 |