by Maple Tree
This truly got to me... powerful write! |
by Brenda
This is hard to comment on. It's very personal and sad you feel all alone. Hugs to you - |
by Em
This is raw and too personal to comment much on in my opinion.. thanks for sharing |
by DarkLight
Thank you guys. But this is far from my experience, I tried fitting in other peoples shoes to engage emotionally to their feelings and how they view the surroundings of their lives. So I came up with this as awareness to everyone who keep friends but bothers not to find out how they are away from the masked life they let seen. I realized that the number of people suffering from loneliness and depression are mostly those who surrounds themselves with people. |
Sadly there are lots of people who will relate to this because they either dont have friends or close family. When we were kids we would sit for hours talking to random elderly people and they would talk about their lives or we would sit and listen to our Grandma tell us about her adventures and life stories but you are right no one wants to listen any more. Very well written emotional and astute. Milly x |
by Lucifer
I don't talk or write much on sensitive poems, but You have another family here, talk to us and I am sure you will feel like home. |
I can relate well and you have expressed yourself well. You are not alone. All the very best |
by mossgirl19
Hi, Darklight. This piece is very raw and I think we all can relate to that feeling of being alone in silence. People think of dying instead of living which appears to be easier. I do agree this world is in need of genuine relationships where there is openness and sharing of thoughts and feelings...but as you have said, people are busy surviving on their own...much more care about others. |
by DarkLight
I trust that I can count on you. |
by CJ Maleney
Dude this is amazing. |
by DarkLight
It means a lot coming from you craig |