Adjure adjure! I loved it very much. A unique and lovable story, Mark.

I love butterflies, and I loved what you wrote about them.

Mark, Imaginary is vivid!

And it's not possible for us to describe it wholeheartedly, even if we want to do so.

It would be injustice to describe something this beautiful in our words.
The poet himself could have done it, which indeed you did it very well!

Now just want to see it in the nominations.

How beautiful

Grateful for all the comments :)

A beautiful visual piece that transported me into a heavenly garden. You have a talent for capturing such detail and weaving it into such effortless prose as to suck your reader instantly into your reality. Definitely warrants nomination. Milly x

Mark,

A wonderful poem full of colours and imagery of life in a garden.
pleasure and refreshing read my friend

Michael :)

I can see it and I can smell it! It's beautiful and feels like you pressed "pause" to notice all the tiny nuances of everything happening in the garden. So clever! x
=^.^=

I am in dark places at the moment, it's true...but I'm a nature girl at heart, and I love elegant wording and beautiful flow. This peice is breathtaking Mark