Comments : H2O

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    This is beautiful and that ending brought a tear to my eye

    • 7 years ago

      by Mandy

      Thank you, Em!

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    Mandy
    Blown away with this lovely piece. So much emotion shared :
    Much love
    Michael

  • 7 years ago

    by Mark

    Amazingly well written! Powerful piece....'you are dew....early morning....clinging to my petals' beautiful

    • 7 years ago

      by Mandy

      Thank you everyone for the kind comments :D

      -mandy

  • 7 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    This is lovely Mandy! I love the concept of needing someone as much as you need water to live. Very powerful and thought provoking x
    =^.^=

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow, Mandy! Agree with Michael this is breathtaking!!! Lovely work, I hope someone nominates this!

  • 7 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Water pouring on the skin
    The need to drink absorb within
    To hydrate both mind and soul
    Two as one becoming whole.

    Beautiful inspirational stuff Mandy

    Regards

    Craig

  • 7 years ago

    by Lucifer

    You are a poem full of love making me forget that there is a world, I live in.

  • 7 years ago

    by Fredy RoMa0u Sanchez

    Beautiful visuals, describing nicely just how much that person means to you. Great piece

  • 7 years ago

    by D. Lloyd

    Great write!