by Paul Hirst Sep 14, 2017
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
My heart broken inside this chest an empty vessel my Mary Celeste |
by BlueJay
The rhythm here is interesting and it worked a lot better than I expected at first glance of the piece. This write definitely tugged at my heartstrings, but it was also very cleverly penned. |
by Paul Hirst
Thank You |
by Paul Hirst
Thank You |
by Mandy
This read so musical to me, I love it! Well written! But very sad. |
by Paul Hirst
Thank You |