by Jenny Paradise Sep 17, 2017
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Your eyes when they twinkle, |
by Brenda
Jenny, what a lovely write. Isn't love grand? I can see how special this person is to you-well done- |
by Mark
Nicely written jenny, love is in the air. Second last verse maybe 'will' is meant to be 'with'. :) |
Thank you for pointing that out. Its fixed now :) |