I love how I can relate to this, I've moved around way too much in my lifetime and whenever I move back or even extended visit places I'm carried away in the paths I traveled with specific people and it is so beautiful it hurts or it stings so much all I can do is smile that we had moments that powerful - and I think you captured that effortlessly here.

The only suggestion I have is maybe your format could use a little bit of restructuring because the longer lines messed with the interesting and well working flow you had at first.

I had similar feelings returning home after 5 years living 360. I didn't want to as my home town has too many ghosts.

However finances and the difference in property prices between north and south made it necessary.

A very relatable poem.

Craig