Michael this is brilliant and personal, yet no doubt reflects the fears of many of us. And it looks so pretty! So clever! x |
by Michael
Thank you Miss Kitty K for lovely comments x :) |
by Mark
Last stanza is powerful here, where there is weakness - there is strength. Well written and formated |
by Michael
Thank you Mark :) |
Dynamic piece that's will resonate with many. Liked the line formats too. Milly x |
by Michael
Yes Miss Milly, a poignant and reflective piece |
Very poweful poem.. |
by Michael
Thanks nams :) |
I wanted to nominate this previously but for some reason I thought I had used up all my nominations. Luckily I double checked so you are duly nominated :) |
by Michael
Thank you Miss Milly for your nomination :) |
by Em
Michael you have seamlessly laid your ass on the line here.. I love this it's deep, raw, honest, personal and honest all rolled into one wonderful piece |
by Michael
Thanks Em, all truth :)x |
by Brenda
Michael, an honest write. It's never easy to open yourself up like this, exposing your neck so to speak. Thank you for sharing such a personal part of who you are. Well done- |
by Michael
Thank Miss Brenda, as always your comments bring warmth and a trueness |
I am certainly afraid of the dark because I cant see what's going on around me. I often have viven in to temptations and of course I had to learn the hard way. Thank you for sharing. |
by Michael
Thank you Dagmar, |