by Diablosangel87 Sep 22, 2017
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I'm left with this emptiness inside avoid only your love can fill, but I'm like a ghost in your eyes a shadow you can't seem to recognize. I'm scared I'll never cross your mind she's gone like an angel with wings let me sleep tonight... you'd never know what I do I'd even go to hell for you, you gave me life but then you took my heart it's like you died with it. My memories of you will never close gone are the days we used to share but in my heart you will always be there, I miss you more than anyone know's and now and forever I'd wait an eternity to see your smile, touch your lips with mine you don't know how it feels then and now knowing you're not real, I hide my tears when I say your name but the pain in my heart is still the same and it's then I realize you're the one that got away... |
by Lost One
I enjoyed this a lot. I actually posted a poem with the same name a few months ago. Keep writing. |
by Em
Excellent |
A beautiful roller coaster of emotion. I feel your loss so deeply. The loss of someone so loved touches even the hardest of hearts. I think as with your other poem splitting the lines into stanzas would make it easier to read but even so a great piece. Milly x |