Kai, I really liked this a lot. It's almost like an inner monologue, wanting this person to stay, afraid of scaring them away. Very innovative. I look forward to reading more from you-welcome to P&Q!

Powerful, beautiful, and strong. Putting myself into the shoes of the writer, I can feel how lost they are. Lost but still moving. The connection is gone, missing that piece, but you still have your strength, your peace. Pull yourself together and and stay strong. Great work Kai! I look forward to reading more from you.