I had to re-read this over again...it's really profound. Even now I'm not sure...as if you torment yourself by picturing her.

"Whenever
I try to sketch her beauty
in the canvas of my eyes,"

This is amazing ... like Mark, I've read it several times ... so wonderful to find one so beautiful, but at what price? I'll be thinking about this one for a while! x
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This is genuinely the best poem I've read in a long time. Holy crap. Nominated without a doubt and if this doesn't win, i will be so sad.

This is extremely poetically beautiful

This really is just lovely! Well done-

Wow! This is is breathtakingly beautiful, Shane. Added to faves.

Simply gorgeous

Free verse,

This piece has beauty throughout, with a delicate read of intrigue. The imagery is abstract, which makes it even more interesting.
A wonderful piece of writing and a joy to read

Michael :)

Congratulations on your front page win! A well deserving win for a well deserving write.

Congratulations on your win Free verse great to see this on the front page

Michael :)

Congrats on you win.

I'm so glad this won Shane, congratulations! x
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Free Verse congrats!!!!

Congrats

Congrats on your win, Shane!

Thanks you so much for the wishes.

I am pleased this has won. It was my honour to nominate this. Keep writing!

I'm sorry but for some reason I previously missed commenting on this poetic gem. It's beautifully written with amazing visuals and I dont think anything i could write could do it justice. Congratulations on a well deserved win. Milly x

Congratulations on the win! Well-deserved!
-Emily

Whenever
I try to sketch her beauty
in the canvas of my eyes,
I have to give a part of me
to make it look alive.
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Love this! :) I have soo much to catch up on. I love this poem man!