by Sherry Caayupan Sep 26, 2017
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
A chain through the hollow moon in endless nights, |
A well deserved nomination with beautiful visuals and agree with Ben the rhymes and half rhymes work brilliantly. Milly x |
Thanx! I really appreciate it! ;) |
by Ya----Na
Full of wonders. I loved 3rd stanza the most |
Thanx! It was inspirational... :) |
Thanx! It was inspirational... :) |
Thanx! It was inspirational... :) |
Thanx! It was inspirational... :) |
Beautiful imagery Sherry ... a lovely read :-) |
Thanx, Kitty! Hope you enjoyed reading this! :) |
by Ben Pickard
This is very good. The rhymes and clever half rhymes have not suffocated the rich imagery in any way which isn't always easy to achieve. Well done. |
Thank you, ben! I loved writing this one! :) |