I love this ... the taste of lost pride ... so clever and the first three lines especially so! :-) x
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Loved this too. And agree with Kitty Cat the first three lines were superb. I really liked the layout of text too with the dripping and falling. Milly x

Kitty read this well - taste of lost pride. This is very good and uniquely formatted Michael. A golden week of poetry from you - I sense a win in the cyber air.

Michael,
Much like everyone else, i loved this.. :)
How hard it is to admit when we have lost our pride, yet portrayed wonderfully.
Well done

Added to my favorite. Have a blessed day

Michael, you definitely are on fire this week. This write being no exception. Loved the layout, loved the story behind the write. Well done-

This is so lovely! :)