by Erin Cruise Sep 27, 2017
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Your touch steadies me, |
by Ya----Na
It is unrequited most of the times. |
by Erin Cruise
Thanks! |
Erin, you've described the process of falling for someone so beautifully but now I'm sad that it's unrequited. Fantastic! x |
by Brenda
Nicely written, the story flows beautifully of a love that is perfect for you but alas can never be. Well done - |
by Ben Pickard
Yes, a very good read with some great use of metaphor throughout. |
This piece leads the reader through the depth of feeling of a great love with perfectly captured emotion to the final reveal that it is unrequited. An enjoyable read. Milly x |