This piece leads the reader through the depth of feeling of a great love with perfectly captured emotion to the final reveal that it is unrequited. An enjoyable read. Milly x

Yes, a very good read with some great use of metaphor throughout.

All the best

Nicely written, the story flows beautifully of a love that is perfect for you but alas can never be. Well done -

Erin, you've described the process of falling for someone so beautifully but now I'm sad that it's unrequited. Fantastic! x
=^.^=

It is unrequited most of the times.
Sad yet beautiful
Your poem is among my favorites.