by Gwenyth Hill Sep 30, 2017
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
They all connect so well |
by Em
This resonates so much with me that I found myself nodding along. Great rhyming and love the second stanza the most. My only advice (take it if you will) is to centre the piece as the lines are different lengths but that's just my opinion and one I learnt from someone on here |
by Gwenyth Hill
Thanks! I appreciate the feedback! |