Comments : persistently airy

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Ether, I really liked this. It could be read and interpreted a number of ways. In todays world we absolutely need to have our warnings systems upgraded. In a personal relationship, if someone isn't reading the other persons signals and changing moods properly, they will need their warnings systems upgraded as well. Well done-

  • 7 years ago

    by Robin Carretti

    I like a lot has all the elements a poem should have thanks

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow... I like the flow of this, Ether...great presentation of the subject matter. It had me from the beginning. Great write!

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    My opinion is this could be interpreted many ways (as Brenda said) but it's written in a fantastic way to but I personally feel it's about you being by someones side regardless of hardships helping them through them

  • 7 years ago

    by Mark

    Congratulations ether!

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Congratulations and good luck navigating those rocky rings.

  • 7 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Congratulations on your win Ether! :-)
    =^.^=

  • 7 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Congrats on your win

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Congrats on your win, Ether!

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    Well done on your win Ether

    Michael :)

  • 7 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Congrats on the win

  • 7 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Congratulations, ether

  • 7 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Congratulations on your win this week. Milly x

  • 7 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Judging Comment

    The subject matter here can be interpreted in many
    ways and made to think about in many ways too. It talks
    about been with someone and been by their side through
    thick and thin yet within that situation there can be lots
    of problems as well. I like the way this poem has been
    presented and the flow of the read…well penned!

  • 6 years ago

    by Emily Wacker

    Congratulations on the win! Well-deserved!
    -Emily