Comments : Autumn (acrostic)

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    Kasie

    This is a beautiful autumn acrostic, with colours and imagery throughout
    (we have both chosen 'Autumn' for an acrostic) its a lovely style of poetry
    well done
    Much love

    Michael :)

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    This is beautiful its hard to do an acrostic perfectly but to rhyme if too just astounding work

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Kasie, what a lovely acrostic. Fall is my favorite season and this brings beautiful visuals. Well done-

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you

  • 7 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Beautiful and full of wonders.
    I am a big fan of nature.
    Very well penned, kasie.

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    A rhyming acrostic with superb imagery that relates to Autumn. Like you, I love the journey of a crispy burnt orange leaf as it dances it's way to mother earth.

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you, I couldn't have said it better myself. Autumn is my favorite time of year.

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    I love this Kasie...it was a visual treat and made me think of how beautiful autumn might be from where you are...we have no autumn here! Great piece!

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you

  • 7 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Judging comment

    There have been many poems in recent weeks regarding autumn and the impending winter to follow. Most have been trepidation fueled.

    I enjoyed reading this because it is the complete opposite. It does a fantastic job of reminding us that there is beauty in all seasons.

    To rhyme an acrostic can be difficult but I think the author has done rather well. The only thing that threw me a little was the rhyming between lines 3 and 4. However as criticism goes this is tiny.

    well done on a lovely poem (4)

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you for your time and comment.

  • 6 years ago

    by Joseph Kerr

    Love this, well written / rhyming
    I am new to poetry and acrostic was not a term I was familiar with, this is elegantly structured around each starting letter, on point and meaningfully rhymed.