by Mark Oct 3, 2017
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Hades, I implore you! Cut this zealous string |
by Em
My goodness... The third stanza is the most tight one here. All this is beautifully emotionally |
by mossgirl19
Wow... Such desire to be happy... Wonderfully expressed. Great presentation here, Mark... It's very effective. Lovely tone, great rhyming too. Great work. |
by Michael
Wow! Mark what a wonderful piece of writing |
by Ya----Na
Hades oh ruler of my destined place and doom |
by Mini
Beautiful! :) |