If i were a builder..

Beautifully written...a well-deserved win! Congratulations!

Congratulations on the win! Well-deserved!
-Emily

JUDGING COMMENT:
If I were a builder by Michael points 7
Here we have a well laid out and thought through piece by Michael and one that makes you think thoroughly about how you see life yourself and what you'd do to make things better if you could and Michael puts all this together in one full swoop of how he'd overcome all the woes of the world and make it a much better place with him becoming a builder not of construction sites but of people, of communities and last but not least the whole world and I personally think we need more people like this in the world because there is so much hatred in the world today. I take my hat off to you Michael for being honest enough to write this piece with such sass

Nice work Michael, a Metaphor after my own heart, the mix of life in the construction worked well, a structure with a message for all to see and heed.

Judging Comment

I really liked the message that has been brought out here and
the layout of it, as well as the breaking up of words which stresses
a point without trying to push a point across to the reader.
This poem has a positive and shinny out looks and just wish
more people in this world feel and act towards this goal rather
then thinking to destroy! Truly an enjoyable read.