by Mark Oct 5, 2017
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I wonder if an unusual flock of white crowned sparrows |
Such a sad piece and you did a wonderful job. Where is this world going with these evil people living in. All the very best. |
by Hellon
What a very sad piece...it's the first I've read since this horrible event took place. I like how you have managed to keep the tone of the poem somber throughout, it works so well with your word choice. |
by Michael
Mark, |
by Em
This is extremely beautiful yet so sad and one that packs a real hard punch in the gut with fantastic imagery as ever |
So sad but beautifully penned Mark. x |