Endless

by MoonMaiden   Oct 5, 2017


Endless tears
Endless coping
Endless fears
Endless hoping

Endless dreams
Endless you
Endless thoughts
Endless persue

Endless convoys
Endless walks
Endless nightmares
Endless haunts

Endless feelings
Endless care
Endless unknowing
Endless affair

Endless laughter
Endless strive
Endless solider
Endless life

(This might change.. thinking about adding more..)

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  • 7 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    It's great as it is.. but how do you add more? I can't find either a Delete or an Edit option. Is it because I'm using my phone, & not a computer?
    Anyway, sorry, I digress! This has a complete catalogue of emotion, so I think adding more could lead to a 'long goodbye'. It's wonderful as it is x

    • 7 years ago

      by MoonMaiden

      Im using my phone. You have to go to the little person at the top right of the page. It has submit a poem/quote, favorites, etc.. Go to manage writings. Underneath each title you write you should have the option to edit, delete or feature.
      I hope thats what you were asking.. Lol.
      Also thank you so much. Ive decided to keep it as is (:

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    I think it's perfect as it is

  • 7 years ago

    by Mark

    Unique and powerful

  • 7 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Craig
    i would leave it as it.. This is honestly very thought provoking. the last line is such a powerful one.. often we can feel like our lives ar endless..

    Well done on this write.

    • 7 years ago

      by MoonMaiden

      Thank you for both comments, they're always taken into consideration & never unappreciated. (:

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