by John Doe Oct 7, 2017
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
In a town where no one goes, |
by Brenda
Wow, this is amazing! I love the story line and your rhyming through-out. Flows beautifully! |
by gumshuda
see, I told ya, it flows very well compared to any of your previous work. |
Ooh twisty! Really unique and full of mystery ... I'm left wanting to know the full story. Brilliant! :-) |
What an imaginative and compelling piece. The rhyming and flow are excellent and the way you raise curiosity in the reader to find out who is this not and why is he waiting?.. |
by MoonMaiden
I absolutly adored reading this. The words literally flowed off the toungue so freely. This is a great write |
by John Doe
Thank you! |