Comments : Bitter Taste

  • 7 years ago

    by Gwenyth Hill

    WOW! Love the rhyming in this poem. Really like the last stanza.

    • 7 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Aw thanks Gwenyth, lovely comments :-)
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  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is great, Kitty. The extended food metaphor is superb here - funny and dark at the same time.
    Also, I couldn't resist liking this as I once wrote a poem called 'The Weevils and I' - 'weevils' - such a fantastic word!

    Take care and all the best as ever,

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks Ben ... ... ooh ... love the 'funny and dark' thing ;-)
      Yes fab word and I'm going to go and have a read of your weevils now ;-) x
      =^.^=

  • 7 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Loved the food metaphors. A deliciously dark yet humerous write and of course goes without saying I love the rhyming element too. Milly x

    • 7 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks so much Milly ... I can't bake to save my life though! Lol x
      =^.^=

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Now, that is the last time I eat your brownies. lol

    I can imagine the energetic beating of rancid batter, folding anger into doubter and over. Slowly resentment fills the kitchen along with the building smoke from the over-cooked batch you forgot about during your wild musing.

    Burnt brownie, anyone? Anyone?

    • 7 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      hahaha! Okay, so I'm a rubbish cook ... guilty as charged! x
      =^.^=

  • 7 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    It's true without love a relationship can't be bake.
    Well baked! Kitty

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Absolutely genius, genuinely

  • 7 years ago

    by Mark

    Kitty I love the message here! The fun side to your word play..the rhyming.... Very well written!

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Kitty, so very true...there is no good taste coming from anything that doesn't have love there. You really did a wonderful job with this write. I can just feel the angst and bitterness of a lost love-cleverly wrapped in this poem-well done-

    • 7 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Lovely comments! Thanks so much Brenda :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 7 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Fantastic poem and really well worked but do me a favour never invite me to dinner lol.

    • 7 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Pah! You'll be lucky Craig ;-) lol
      Thanks x
      =^.^=