by Gwenyth Hill
WOW! Love the rhyming in this poem. Really like the last stanza. |
Aw thanks Gwenyth, lovely comments :-) |
by Ben Pickard
This is great, Kitty. The extended food metaphor is superb here - funny and dark at the same time. |
Thanks Ben ... ... ooh ... love the 'funny and dark' thing ;-) |
Loved the food metaphors. A deliciously dark yet humerous write and of course goes without saying I love the rhyming element too. Milly x |
Thanks so much Milly ... I can't bake to save my life though! Lol x |
by Mr. Darcy
Now, that is the last time I eat your brownies. lol |
hahaha! Okay, so I'm a rubbish cook ... guilty as charged! x |
by Ya----Na
It's true without love a relationship can't be bake. |
lol ... thanks Shane ;-) x |
by Em
Absolutely genius, genuinely |
Wow thanks Em! x |
by Mark
Kitty I love the message here! The fun side to your word play..the rhyming.... Very well written! |
Thou thanks thy Mark ;-) x |
by Mark
:-P |
by Brenda
Kitty, so very true...there is no good taste coming from anything that doesn't have love there. You really did a wonderful job with this write. I can just feel the angst and bitterness of a lost love-cleverly wrapped in this poem-well done- |
Lovely comments! Thanks so much Brenda :-) x |
by CJ Maleney
Fantastic poem and really well worked but do me a favour never invite me to dinner lol. |
Pah! You'll be lucky Craig ;-) lol |