Comments : Swim

  • 7 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    This reminds me a little of the voyages of the Dawntreader in the most pleasant way. Oh if it were so easy to find life's answers I think there would be many of us out there swimming. A delightful piece. Milly x

    • 7 years ago

      by words2myself

      Thanks Milly glad you enjoyed reading it.

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    I'd love to find this place

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    I think this place would be an awesome place to find. I love the concept with this-lovely!

  • 7 years ago

    by MoonMaiden

    This can get one thinking. Yet another poetically beautiful peice. Keep it up!

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Feels like a breath of fresh air. I wish I know how to swim literally! Hehe. As Milly said, this is a delight to read.