Funny, isn't it? Two perfectly suited lovers may agree on everything - perhaps never have a cross word - but they may never agree on who loves the other more! well done, I enjoyed this.

Ben

The phrase "but I miss you more' certainly made me smile. It is so sweet, when you add 'more' to the usual phrase you say. I feel your love greatly in this write, although I am surprised it went too long...I mean the length somehow distracted the sentiment.

I read that you have a rhyme scheme involved in here, for me it worked quite well. I just find it a little bit open ended. With all the build up in the preceding stanzas I would have loved the second to the last stanza to be the ending. I think 'misery misses company' would be a great.

That aside, I sure love the piece and the sweet sentiment. Well done.

Cjt, one of your best so far.
Just loved it.
Can't choose a certain stanza the whole poem is so so so beautifully written.
Added this gem to my favorites.

CJT

So many different variations of missing someone, which tells me a lot of how you refer to as missing, like missing 'sugar in tea' whereas I would dislike sugar in tea. Which brings simple things we love to how much we compare to missing :0
Really enjoyed reading this

Michael :)