by Saakiel Oct 8, 2017
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
We met on the other side |
by yogi73
I like the motif of "umoved" thru-out this poem. Many times in life we anticipate, only to find ourselves unmoved. The last sentence really closes the whole poem with a touch of saddness. Well done. |
by Saakiel
Thank you so much Yogi73. I tried my hardest to keep 'unmoved' through the poem. |