Comments : Unmoved

  • 6 years ago

    by yogi73

    I like the motif of "umoved" thru-out this poem. Many times in life we anticipate, only to find ourselves unmoved. The last sentence really closes the whole poem with a touch of saddness. Well done.

    • 6 years ago

      by Saakiel

      Thank you so much Yogi73. I tried my hardest to keep 'unmoved' through the poem.

      xxx