First sight

by deeplydesturbed   Oct 8, 2017


The other day I asked a question..
One I didn't expect an answer for..
Yet you really suprised me
Opened my heart a little more..

I realise I'm difficult
I made you wait for years..
I fight with you on everything
Once even bought you to tears..

It's hard for me to let you see
Everything I go through..
But know I'm working on it each day
My little gift to you..

I am damaged goods
A broken usless soul..
But to me each small step
Feels like the winning goal..

So I asked you for the truth
When did you know it was love..
And your answer was so sincere
Rays of sunlight appeared through stormy clouds above..

So what was the answer
You whispered without hesitation..
Simple..

"The day I knew I loved you, was the very first time we met"..

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  • 6 years ago

    by Khai Montegrande

    send chills in my spines.... very nice words and the burst of full blown emotion in one great masterpiece

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    Nams,

    This is a heart-felt piece from you, with emotions flowing all the way through. I especially like the two lines of 'but to me each mall step,
    feels like the winning goal'

    A really enjoyable piece and worthy of my nomination :0
    Much love
    Michael x

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    My frozen heart is thawed

  • 7 years ago

    by Mark

    Beautiful Nams. Like free verse, I just adore the last stanzas, perfect ending for this piece.

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Ahhhhh...ayeee...this is so sweet, Nams!!! It is really a joy to have someone accept and love us for who we are. We all have our weaknesses, but love does see past thru them. Happy for you!

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