What a beautifully romantic poem. I truly believe true love heals all wounds in time because love is unconditional. This piece takes us through the dark and brings us out into the sunshine. Milly x

Really well written and so lovely yet so sad all at the same time!

I agree with Milly, true love can heal so much. x
=^.^=

This is so sweet. Love can often be an alien emotion; a person can feel unworthy of it, even not knowing how it feels. This is love in early blossom; a love building into a huge grand garden on love. Best of luck for best of love - you deserve the happiness and security it can bring. X

Naomi, as Kitty says, a sad piece in so many ways, but tinged with the colours of a rainbow too...and maybe a little treasure at the end there!

Take care,

Ben

your answer was so sincere
Rays of sunlight appeared through stormy clouds above..

So what was the answer
You whispered without hesitation..
Simple..

"The day I knew I loved you, was the very first time we met"..

Just loved this poem, especially this part.
To my list of favorites.

Oh Nams, this is so wonderful! Love is an amazing thing and when we have that someone special to share it with=priceless! I'm so happy for you-

Ahhhhh...ayeee...this is so sweet, Nams!!! It is really a joy to have someone accept and love us for who we are. We all have our weaknesses, but love does see past thru them. Happy for you!

Beautiful Nams. Like free verse, I just adore the last stanzas, perfect ending for this piece.

My frozen heart is thawed

Nams,

This is a heart-felt piece from you, with emotions flowing all the way through. I especially like the two lines of 'but to me each mall step,
feels like the winning goal'

A really enjoyable piece and worthy of my nomination :0
Much love
Michael x

send chills in my spines.... very nice words and the burst of full blown emotion in one great masterpiece