by Em
All I'm going to say is I really hope my nomination shows how much I appreciate this write. Not once have I used up all my nominations in one day.. My goodness that ending is the most raw hard hitting piece I've read in an age and it resonates so much with me |
by CJ Maleney
There are many of us out there to whom this will this will resonate. |
by Brenda
Wow, I am so glad this is nominated. A very strong write that so many of us can really relate to-it's the unthinkable that drives us to do just as your poem says-well done- |
by Mark
Very powerful and thought provoking! Societal responses and dealing with such violence is explored here in this great write |
This is brilliant and profound. True and tragic. These lessons never seem to be learned and solutions never found. And repeat. |
by mossgirl19
We want change but are unwilling to start small changes within our selves... I personally want to change the way things are but can't get past my own dilemma a lot of times. This resonated deep as this is as Kitty puts it...true and tragic. It is very well put, great piece. |
by Ya----Na
This is the truth about the today's world which we all have accepted. |
Beautiful imagery in a desolate and ugly world. Loved the visuals. Milly x |
Thank you all for reading. |
Congratulations on your HM this week. All my best wishes Milly x |
by Em
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