Hopelessly in love

by Brenda   Oct 9, 2017


My heart dances
to a beat only you
know the words to-
It's our language of love...
-
The music we
know well-
a familiar tune woven
with loving care...
-
Laughter fills our daily
life, easing that daily grind that
would wear down
anyone else but you and I...
-
I want to sing
from the rooftops!
The way you make me feel-
it's pure magic...

Club challenge-"Celebration"
Must be written in 4 line stanzas, syllable count in even numbers-

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  • 7 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A Lovely poem filled with love and laughter. A celebration of love. Milly x

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much Milly, he truly is my Hunny Bunny....

  • 7 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Definitely, it is for someone very special.

    I want to sing
    from the rooftops!
    The way you make me feel-
    it's pure magic...

    And so is your poetry.

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much Free Verse! You are so sweet in your comments.

  • 7 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Aw Brenda ... joyous!
    (Typo on 'heart' in the first line) but that first stanza is just brilliant!
    Love it! x
    =^.^=

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Kitty, thank you so much. Also for catching the typo, I appreciate that. He makes love poems so easy.

  • 7 years ago

    by Mark

    'Woven with loving care'...I really felt the love and joy in this. Ddavidds comment says it all. I've missed your poems! Glad to read a 'Brenda story of love and hapiness'.

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much Mark. He is my everything.

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Awww thank you! He really makes it so easy to celebrate love.

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