I'll bring you Back, I Promise

I'm in bits

I really enjoyed this. I feel a connection to the inspiration of this beautiful work. I would love for you to read mine once you get a chance ???? all the best

Judging comment

I'll bring you Back, I Promise" By Maple Tree 4 points

This clearly speaks of a parents love for an estranged and perhaps lost child.

I think it would be an easy thing to dwell upon and write about the negative aspects of such an experience but this poem does not follow that path. At least I think!

It tells of hope, of not giving up and it shows a great deal of strength and resolve.

I wouldn't normally quote from a poem but no this occasion I will.

"My soul shall adorn you
with a daisy chain around your heart,
for you are golden,
my child of the moon"

Quite possibly some of the most beautiful words I have read.

Craig

Can say this now. Most of us know the story and we pray for you both.

Ps. I ain't god squad, but it's worth a shot x

Congratulations on your HM this week. All my best wishes Milly x

It is in a mother's nature to fight for our children and se will go to the extreme. Praying has helped me sadly my daughter has not changed yet. I gave her to God. I wish you all the best and lots of happiness.