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  • 7 years ago

    by MoonMaiden

    There is not one thing i didnt like about this peice. Its not hard to see this came straight from the heart. Something many have faced but you brought those emotions out well in this. Great job girl. 5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This poem is full of questions that I certainly don't have the answer to.

    Well done and all the best,

    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    aw **sniffs** ... we've all experienced this awful feeling I bet, and you've depicted that gut-wrenching feeling so well! Good job Brittany :-)
    =^.^=

  • 7 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    I really loved this poem and it resonated within.

    If you have to compete for someones heart you have to ask yourself "are they worth the fight".

    Things do get easier but you never forget! Time passes and you don't dwell on them so much. You never forget. Little insignificant things act as triggers and snap you right back into memories.

    As for forgiving someone who has constantly put you last on their list of priorities? Not sure if they deserve forgiveness, but then some people are bigger than I.

    I have a little phrase "you cannot forgive someone if they don't know what they've done".

    I hope you find peace and tranquility

    Craig

  • 6 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Offense is test of endurance. Forgiveness is freedom purchased. When the sun sets, the moon rises. There's always a place called Forward. Within every scar, healing dwells. With focused sensitivity; it can only just get better. Cheer up!

  • 5 years ago

    by TonyRHolden

    This is hitting me today Brit. I finally have an end date in sight and it’s bittersweet.

    • 5 years ago

      by brittany williams

      I’m so happy to hear that but I pray you get the strength to move forward and heal and be happy you deserve it