Comments : Your extinction

  • 7 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A powerful dark piece. Cleverly unveiling piece by piece a harrowing tale of betrayal. A brave and compelling piece. Milly x

    • 7 years ago

      by Risqué

      Thank you Milly!

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    Wow! Risqué
    Such a powerful sadness throughout and your desperate yearning for just wanting to feel safe. Instead betrayal, such a heart-felt piece..
    Much love and warmth
    Michael x :)

    • 7 years ago

      by Risqué

      Thank you, as always Michael, for taking the time to read my thoughts.

  • 7 years ago

    by Paul Hirst

    Lovely passionate write
    well done

  • 7 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Such a sad tale of the utter betrayal of a mother not believing her own child when she tells of abuse at the hands of a family member. I suspect this is sadly all too common. A gripping, haunting write. Well done x
    =^.^=

    • 7 years ago

      by Risqué

      Thank you for reading.