This is great insight into how depression affects every facet of a life, both internal and external. It's a good reminder about why we shouldn't be too quick to judge someone ... you just never know what's going on or what they're dealing with.

My only suggestion (I hope you don't mind me saying) would be to stick with 'she/her' ... a couple of times you've slipped into 'I/I'm' and it jolts the lovely flow a little bit.

A great and insightful poem :-) x
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I love it, an I feel like you are referring to she as "me". this is how I feel everyday.