Love this small but punchy piece. Well thought out flowing with excellent rhyming and spot on content. Milly x

Love this small but punchy piece. Well thought out flowing with excellent rhyming and soot on content. Milly x

I love the flow and the meaning behind it. Thanks for sharing and all the very best. Add to my favorite.

The word that stuck with me here is powerful. What few lines & simple words have such meaning & emotion that go so far in depth here. This is amazing in every way.

I love this, Paul. I got a really strong feeling as I read this. Short but definitely hit the nail.

Such a powerful piece

This made a great impact. Thankyou x

What an awesome write! I always enjoy a piece about Jesus. He is a common subject matter in much of what i write. This poem is concise and powerful a tremendous piece indeed. Great work!